Below is a quick synopsis of the two extra scenes:
- When we first see the man (his arm is holding door open) he should look ominous. After Betty looks up at the man, we see a light come up from behind the man which makes his shadow long making him look scary and dominating but when the light changes direction, we see a car turn left in the background. This reveals the strange light that made the man's shadow appear longer than it is to be from the cars' headlights. The shadow then drops in size to his real shadow and is revealed to be a short man.
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At the beginning of the third act, just after Betty has hit William over the head with a frying pan, and just before we see the party starting at the diner, I was thinking of adding an extra panel where we see people in silhouette form running from the buildings on either side of the diner into the diner for the party. They could be carrying champagne bottles, balloons, disco ball etc.
This would work in my film as it'll establish that Betty's friends (since we saw her looking up to the building earlier) are the people at the party, and not random strangers.
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